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Planet Aris was nothing more than a pile of sand. It had no water, no life and the environment was deadly. Only a few villages of colonists were able to survive in the dunes. They lived a simple life, surviving off of imports. They suffered constantly because of the harsh environment. One afternoon, bots with laser eyes and metal legs fell from the sky. They slaughtered every one of the villagers except for one, Hugh. He was taken by the king of the Alphas, a blood-thirsty race bent on destruction. The man had slaughtered his entire planet and ended his life as he knew it, but he was expected to be his obedient lover and Hugh loved that idea. *Disclaimer*: This book contains adult, sexually explicit content with an intense sex scene, male breeding and knotting and dominant alpha with his delicate rare omega. This should not be viewed for anyone under the age of 18 *Scroll up and get your copy today!Don't Forget To Get Your FREE Ebook Gift Inside!
Omega: Found , by The Alpha King (Gay Omega Mpreg Steamy Short Story Romance) (Gay Omega, Gay Alpha, Gay Fiction, Male Pregnancy, Gay Romance), by Aiden Bates- Published on: 2015-06-21
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7 of 7 people found the following review helpful. The books itself had a good premise, but it was executed poorly. By Lauren R. The book itself had a good premise (as in, it was a good idea, and this "book" was just the outline of how the author wanted the book to go but never reached a full plot or character development and just published his idea).It was executed poorly and was very short (20 pages), it was not edited, and had no plot, or character development. Things are jumped into very quickly, scenes jump around, there's no foreplay or preparation at all, and to be honest the sex scenes don't make a lot of sense (they're in the middle of one thing, and one of them does something that would be impossible to do in the position they were in. It's hard to follow) There is also no build up to the characters, the alpha kills the omegas entire planet, yet the minute the omega sees him, he's on his knees in front of the alpha. You know nothing about the characters, but their names, and never learn anything about them either, but for 20 pages only, I guess that's what you'll get. If you're looking for a quick, jumpy, weirdly written sex scene, then you'll like this "book".
4 of 4 people found the following review helpful. Good thing it was FREE !!! By Hill-Dom Wow! If this hadn't been free, I'd want my money back. As it is I just lost 15 minutes of my life.The premise sounded good, however the execution wasn't there. The editing was terrible, sink is not sync, hole does not equal whole.The 2 reviewers that gave this story 5 stars obviously didn't read the same story I read. Oh, and another thing...where's th lubricant? I've read stories where either partner was self lubricating, but there was no prep at all in this story!Ugh!! I'm very disappointed!This desperately needs a re-write and about 40-80 more pages. Like I said earlier, good premise, nonexistent execution!
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful. I found it trite and dull. The writing was unoriginal By Fran Tullo Frankly, I found it trite and dull. The writing was unoriginal, and the magic of the healing d*ck cured all. It was an interesting premise, but unfortunately it didn't follow through.
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